第二个结尾，有点意思了，不过语气过于狂妄，而且单纯的总结性语言没有用的，画龙还要点睛呢。

　　第三个结尾，接近我们所要求的结尾了，但是语言过于平淡，泛泛而谈并且就事论事；而且最后一句话明显模仿某些市面上的书中的范文，绝对不可接受。

　　下面我们再来给出一些比较成功的 PS 结尾。这些也都是国外学生的 PS 结尾。

　　Example 13：

　　I want my legal education to make a bigger difference than I can as an engineer， but with a strong family to draw upon I cannot help but live a successful life。

　　Example 14：

　　Ultimately， I aim to gain a faculty position at a university and to continue my involvement in innovative research in the field while directly encouraging the development of aspiring engineers， both in the classroom and laboratory。 In this manner I believe I can make a significant andpurposeful contribution to the scientific community while gaining a great deal of personalsatisfaction。

　　Example 15：

　　The work I saw at Graduate School of Design had that same element of innovation and freshnessthat I strive for， the one that goes beyond the ordinary path。 I want to be an explorer and to face challenges that I can solve with sheer will and creativity。

　　Example 16：

　　While my GPA may not be as high as some applicants’， my academic record shows a consistentpositive。 I know I have the intelligence， ability， and determination to achieve success in dentistry； I only need the opportunity。 My dental research experience combined with my academic background， personal qualities， and leadership abilities makes me well suited to accept thechallenges in the field of dentistry。

　　Example 17：

　　Stanford's diversity offers an environment for learning， both inside and outside the classroom。 Ihope to share my varied knowledge with my classmates and to take from them a newunderstanding of topics that are foreign to me。 I believe that no other school provides studentswith the combination of education and environment offered by Stanford。 Its outstanding academicreputation， mingled with its diverse environment and thriving Bay Area location， creates an

　　opportunity for growth that is second to none。 I have many ambitions for myself as I embark onthis stage of my life。 I believe that an education from Stanford will provide invaluable experiencesand skills that will allow me to become a successful and innovative business leader in the newmillennium。

　　Example 18：

　　I know how difficult and also how rewarding research can be because both of my parents areresearchers， and I have done research projects for my science courses。 The most important thing，of course， is that humanity may benefit。 Such a pursuit of knowledge would be incredibly satisfying because of its potential to help so many。 To me， the call to a lifetime of this work isirresistible。

　　Example 19：

　　As I continue to write and edit， I rediscover my love for language。 To entertain， to explain， to be able to say what I mean and help others say what they mean。 Language is the highest rung ofexpression， and I mean to climb it。

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